Score: 10

"Yes!!!"

submission: Tears of Red

date: May 20, 2008

It made it impossible for me to stop the urge to cry, and I don't cry much, don't cry at all, but if I did, this would be it.
You have done a good job, and may I suggest that you turn this into an ongoing series? I can just imagine the guy in the story going after his friend's killer, initially for revenge, but later on realizes that revenge is bitter, and defeats him for jusice instead. That would make an awesome sequel, or better yet a series

Score: 10

"That's what I'm talkin' about!"

submission: Lilium -Teaser-

date: May 7, 2008

From what I've seen from your work so far, it's just plain awesome. If I ain't wrong, Lilium will be among the best of the best in no time, a masterpiece above all else, (possibly the 1st place in Ng?) It'll probbably beat most of the other masterpieces. Just remember though, a simple but working preloader is always more likely to get you points than a flashy but non-working one, as it is more organized that way. It's like the cover of a book, and personally I'm not a man who'd judge by the cover. It's all about what's inside, and the way I see it, it deserves a 10.
Great choice of voice actors. Lilium sounds just the way I always imagined, though the old lady could sound a little older. I also totally agree with the voice actor (can't remember his name) that you've chosen for"Tha Shadow!!!" He he, all jokes aside, assuming you have heard his sample work, I'd recommend that the shadow sounds more friendly and charismatic than mad and evil, therefore hiding his true colors. In other words it should be more on the lines of "Hello young fella, would you like to sit a while, and listen to a story?" than "If I can't have happiness, then I shall burn everything around my feet!"

So anyway, I can only wish you luck with your work, and hope you make it to this summer (should have been done by the fall!) and remember, Lilium is a true masterpiece, but masterpieces take a lot of effort to maintain, so be brave.

Good Luck...

Score: 6

"Not bad..."

submission: Moustache-Man

date: March 17, 2008

But not too great. The animation could have been much better, but may be it's supposed to look kinda crappy I don't know.
As for the language, I think there was a bit of Turkish in there. am I correct? I recognized a couple of words or so (I've been to Turkey, nice place by the way).
Anyway, it's alright.